One of the Stylistic elements we talked about this week was sentence length therefore I thought I would overwork this a little and try to write in all short sentences (5-10 words) as a change in style to see if anything good comes of it let’s hope it does not sound like a 5th grader.
This week I was invited to go on a date. Sadly the date fell through. Therefore we went hiking instead. I was with people I had never met. They were very friendly though and we had a blast. We hiked up to a cool waterfall. While there we ate and took pictures. I was able to get a picture under the falls. It was cool and wet down there. When we finally decided to leave there were two groups. One went back the way we came. The other took a different route. The second group was much faster. Therefore I was grateful I was in that group. There was also a way nice girl in that group. It was the perfect day for hiking. The sun was high all day. Yet it never got too hot. It was especially nice by the falls. The mist was beating across our faces. That felt great. I love hiking but have not been for a while. So, I was glad to do it again. The best part was that it was short. That made it possible for me to come home. When I got home I was could do some schoolwork. Overall it was great day in the mountains. Hopefully I can go again soon. Who knows maybe it will come with more girls too.
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